January 16, 2009
For immediate release
ABC Real Estate
123 Creative Way
Logan, UT 84321
801-555-4567
abcrealestatellc.com
Real Estate Investment Opportunity
Local start up seeking investors for Beneficary Dircted Equity Land Holding
Logan, Utah -- ABC Real Estate is seeking investors for a proven investment.
With many success stories over th past 40 years our system is a secure and profitable investment.
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Ill comment on yours because, first of all you dont have any comments yet, but secondly you wrote about as much as me, so i liked that haha. But I'll say to you the same that I need to do, and that is just write more haha. But you did write the contact information on the top, which i didnt see on everybodies, so good job with that. see ya in class
ReplyDeleteI don't know if you should be using first person inan announcement. But that is just me.
ReplyDeleteOther than that, I like that you had full contact info. You needed more. Yeah for the 15 min death trap.
Good luck